Callie walked with a deliberate pace, giving her time to
think about the case before she confronted the victims’ family. It didn’t make
sense. How could a perfectly healthy 21-year-old drop dead in the middle of the
street? Something just wasn’t right.
Callie reached the front door of Mr. and Mrs. Madison’s
house, and raised a fist to knock. However, something caught her attention and
she lowered her hand. The door was open just slightly, giving the impression
that someone had just gone in. She opened the door farther, and called out.
“Bill…..Harriet….”
No answer.
She took a step into the house and looked around. Nothing
seemed out of place. Everything was as it had been the last time she had been
there. The hair rose on her neck.
She walked to the living room and saw that the tea Harriet
had served her just two days ago was still on the coffee table. The cups still
half full of the dark amber liquid, now ice cold. Everything was EXACTLY as it
had been the last time she had been there.
Callie headed toward the stairs leading toward the second
floor of the house. Reaching the top, she began to investigate the rooms on
either side of the landing. Each one she looked in was empty.
Except one.
She gasped at the sight of Bill and Harriet lying side by
side on their bed. Their faces showed signs of fright, twisted and frozen in
horrible expressions. A message in blood could be seen on their mahogany
headboard.
YOU’RE NEXT!
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Ohhh! What scared Bill and Harriet? Is it the same entity that took out the kid? Tune in next time...
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the Trifecta Challenge--great first offering!
Ugh Cliffhanger
ReplyDeleteThat is nerve wracking - what is happening next, very interesting. LM x
ReplyDeleteYikes, that's creepy! This could be the beginning of a tale that will make me not want to turn my lights off at night :)
ReplyDeleteOh, and welcome to Trifecta!
Yikes! Great write. I love that the tea is still sitting on the table. Perfect.
ReplyDeleteScary stuff. I wonder what will happen next.
ReplyDeleteI can just-- you've said A now you have to say B. we need a continuation
ReplyDeleteSo unsettling that they were lying side by side on the bed, with all the tea things down there, ice cold.
ReplyDeleteWelcome!
Yikes! Love the way you've built tension in this piece. Well done! And welcome to Trifecta -- I hope you'll be back with more!
ReplyDeleteThat's what they get for buying mahogany and supporting deforestation ;) Creepy piece!
ReplyDeleteScary and very atmospheric - really enjoyed this.
ReplyDeletenice write-up!
ReplyDeleteChilling! Thanks for linking up.
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone for the comments. I can't wait to do future trifecta entries now that I have found the site.
ReplyDeleteSo far, the entries from everyone that I have read have been really good.
Nice tension building. Welcome to Trifecta!
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